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Review:Alopex says:
Wow. This was the last story I had left to read, and I seriously felt like I was going cross-eyed, and I just had one left, just one, and I could do this last story and then I'd be DONE and could vote, and phew!

Then I started reading. I found I couldn't rush through. This is absolutely in my top five favorite stories written for the task. I thought you did a good job of switching back and forth between the past and present, using the present to emphasize or accentuate the past. The story flowed well and had a dreamy, almost magical feeling to it. You fit the prompts in nicely as well.

I especially enjoyed Qin Shi! That was unique. I don't often come across stories that include a character's pet . . . sure, there are mentions at times, but they're not often included beyond a mention.

Nice story! I really enjoyed it. :D

Author's Response: Wooo thank you for sticking with it and reviewing! Such dedication, for realz.

Oooh wow, that's such a compliment because there have been so many amazing stories and I hadn't even considered that mine might be one of the "best." I tried to make the plots really fit into the story rather than fitting the story into the plots, if that makes sense, and that's also why I unfortunately didn't get all of them in.

The part about Qin Shi is inspired by "the frog prince" by the Grimm Brothers--the small companion, living in a drawer :) I didn't really know where the story was going at first, just that I wanted it to feel timeless like a fairy tale.

Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate you making it all the way to me even though you were so tired :D

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