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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hi! I'm here with your requested review :)

First off I just want to tell you how much I love the whole concept of this story. This is such an original and well thought out plot that it was addicting from the first chapter. I'm sort of at a loss after five chapters on what to say. Everything is so poised and alongside the intricate details of each character, you just can't help but have to know more.

I could see two things happening.. I could see Sirius coming back just at the right time and saving the day, or I could see Regulus standing up to Cygnus and saving the day. Just my - probably incorrect - guesses, though! :) Either way I will be looking forward to reading more.

I love what you've done with every one of the characters, from Sirius and Regulus, to the Marauders, and even Kreacher and Mrs. Weasley. They all have that familiarity that we know and love, but you've taken each one of them and given them an important place, just fitting the part in the puzzle so miraculously.

I've been enjoying the style of this, almost as a play format. I was even thinking how awesome it would be to see it as an actual play! Your imagery and details about the characters actions work so well that it paints such a lovely picture already.

While you said this was a filler I still thought it was amazing in detail and new information. This line: His lips quirked up a bit before he schooled his face into that of a serious monarch-- was my favorite in a loathsome way. As much as I dislike what he is doing and despise him to his core that little smile just described everything and I'm really hoping someone caught that and is going to call him out for it! It seems - from previous chapters - that Dumbledore is onto something so I am looking forward to seeing that play out.

(Kind of completely unrelated:) Have you seen the Prince of Persia movie? The Sands of Time I think it's called. It reminds me a lot of this, if you're interested you should check it out!

Anyway, you've got a brilliant story here, and I'm eager to see what happens next and hopefully be of more help! Keep up the fantastic work, and re-request please! :)

-Julie

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