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Review:Alopex says:
I enjoyed reading this story. It had a flowing, dream-like quality, which is something I enjoy and that nearly always pulls me in like I'm floating through an otherworldly stream.

Yeah, there's some purple prose for you. :P I don't really know how to describe what I mean. Anyway, I thought you did a nice job of working the prompts in. That bit about what Cho thinks is a Foeglass around Aberforth's neck was creative. I haven't seen anyone do anything like that yet to work in the mention! Also, I think Aberforth was a good person for Cho to talk to, even if the conversation was limited to just a few brief words.

Nicely done. :) This was an enjoyable story to read.

Author's Response: Hee I appreciate your purple prose fully ♥ I was trying to sneak in the prompts as subtly as possible (Umbridge was a stretch of stretches). I literally had a checklist of the prompts and was just squinting at all the places I could sneak one in through a metaphor.

Thank you!

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