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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey! :)

AHH I LOVED THIS! You know, dreams are a very common interpretation of the prompts + Cho, but what I absolutely love about yours is that your dream is not Cho-mourning-Cedric-nightmares, but fun, crazy, weird, wacky and out of the normal! I love the Egyptian Paper-Lizard, and how to defeat it you need to read it - such a creative idea!
Also: robes make of leather. GOLD.

All the characters were fantastic. Cho was really great - it wasn't what you'd expect, but she still felt so realistic and canon. I loved Cedric and Flitwick and Ollivander - they all still felt so canon even amidst the craziness of the dream. Basically, the plot of this is so fantastic, and really so amusing and fun to read. I really enjoyed this story! WHY DO YOU WRITE SO BRILLIANTLY?

You incorporated the prompts so flawlessly, and everything seemed to be there. And you did it so cleverly too, I loved that Cho was studying for her Care of Magical Creatures O.W.L, and I loved the names of these textbooks: Caring for Your Hungarian Horntail, A History of the Chinese Fireball, When Your Blast-Ended Skrewt Might Need a Friend. So clever! SO. I LOVED THIS, IN CASE YOU CAN'T TELL. You are so brilliant! And this story is brilliant!

- MM

Author's Response: Charlotte! ♥ Thank you so much for coming by and reviewing this for me -- that's just so awesome that you were willing to do that. :) And sorry for the long delay in responding to this, too!

I didn't realize how common dream-stories were until you and Alo mentioned it, but it was a way I saw of dealing with a) a character I'm not very fond of, and b) prompts I had no clue what to do with. :P I literally just started typing... and this was the result! Gahh, I'm so happy you liked this. ♥ I tried to keep everything somewhat canon, despite, you know, the craziness -- you are so sweet!

The textbook names were also wild inventions from the top of my head, and really, it's pretty much a success for me that this ended up coherent at all. :3 I'm really happy you liked it! You are fab!!

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