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Review:ggilon says:
I think I will do this thing where I read the story and write the review along the way...

Yeah. I think anyone who knows your stories knows you love writing james. We love seeing you writing james as its funny :D
but...why is he always a stalker?

"They just talked and then got ice cream". Why is al always getting ice cream for girls? Let's hope this time it wont end with him stripping infront of her..

"His name was William." I knew I read something about a dragon names william...I thought it was a part of a dream though.
It's most definitely a proper name.

"Pip Pippington". If thats her full name its rather unfortunate..

“It didn’t have charm, it had bloody alcohol,” isn't it the same? It has the same effect anyways...

Harry potter doesn't know how to be neither arrogant nor cocky. He's not enough of a badass.

"Al and I were a team. An unbreakable team of man force". You can smell james getting emotional. I like this.

"Crying because I lost said bottlecap". I think I see myself doing that while drunk. The other stuff mentioned above are just so...James.

"Albus leaned his head on my shoulder". Oh (sorrysorry couldn't help it)

James is right. Dragons really don't need to do much to be cool. They are just dragons.

"Ice cream. Dancing. Kissing on the front porch." Yup. Al has a thing for Ice Cream. And he's really a fluffer(if thats a word. if its not then it has been invented.)

Okay and now a review...I hope it isn't too long :S

I really liked it. It was like taking a centered (can't get the word right, not enough voc') dose of understanding your writing of james and albus. While at times I did have the urge to go "UGH it should have been..." for the most part I really enjoyed it. Nice, clean ending, just the right amount of james being a prat... Makes me wanna read more pieces written by you!

Author's Response: Those are my favorite reviews :) Reactions are so much fun!

I do love James. Not sure what you mean about being a "stalker."

Haha different Albus, but I love ice cream.

Definitely not Pip's actual full name. But it would be so, so unfortunate.

I love James and the bottlecap. I ship it.

It's a word, but it's definitely not what you mean there. haha.

Im glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write for the challenge. Thanks for the review!

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