Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I really did enjoy this! It was a fantastic take on the prompt, and a really refreshing insight into the mind of Cho. I love that you didn't do the typical Cho-reflection-after-Cedric's-death, but chose instead a time after her marriage to a muggle - Michael. It is a really fresh perspective, one I haven't encountered yet, but the way you characterised Cho felt so, so realistic. It's so easy to believe that someone like Cho could be bitter about the adversity, maybe even more than how much she loves her husband.

Really brilliant writing - the feelings and thoughts felt so real, and you managed to tell the readers so much in not that many words. You also incorporated the prompts so seamlessly too. So all in all, I really liked your take on Cho as a wife long after her Hogwarts years - it really was a different and interesting angle. Great fic! :)

- MM

Author's Response: Eee I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was, as the author's note mentioned, going for something a little different with the prompt. I hadn't read any of the entries before I began writing (I still haven't read many, cough), but I guessed Cedric would figure heavily into a lot of them. I don't know how probable this would be for a real Cho, but I'm glad it's realistic too, because that's another thing I wanted. (Also why I couldn't figure out how to fit in a dragon for realz.) So yay, thank you so much for stopping by, very happy you enjoyed it.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net