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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I really did enjoy this! It was a fantastic take on the prompt, and a really refreshing insight into the mind of Cho. I love that you didn't do the typical Cho-reflection-after-Cedric's-death, but chose instead a time after her marriage to a muggle - Michael. It is a really fresh perspective, one I haven't encountered yet, but the way you characterised Cho felt so, so realistic. It's so easy to believe that someone like Cho could be bitter about the adversity, maybe even more than how much she loves her husband.

Really brilliant writing - the feelings and thoughts felt so real, and you managed to tell the readers so much in not that many words. You also incorporated the prompts so seamlessly too. So all in all, I really liked your take on Cho as a wife long after her Hogwarts years - it really was a different and interesting angle. Great fic! :)

- MM

Author's Response: Eee I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was, as the author's note mentioned, going for something a little different with the prompt. I hadn't read any of the entries before I began writing (I still haven't read many, cough), but I guessed Cedric would figure heavily into a lot of them. I don't know how probable this would be for a real Cho, but I'm glad it's realistic too, because that's another thing I wanted. (Also why I couldn't figure out how to fit in a dragon for realz.) So yay, thank you so much for stopping by, very happy you enjoyed it.

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