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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

As I've come to expect from you, anything you write is beautiful and wonderful. This is no exception - the writing is just so brilliant - you really manage to tell the story. You also managed to incorporate all the prompts so effortlessly. I think my favourite bit was Aberforth's advice to Cho - I just really felt like both of their characters were so canon and realistic in that moment.

I liked the three different sections: dragons, drowning, death, but I felt that it was missing a little something to connect the three sections and make it into one story. I felt like they were three completely different stories that didn't work together as well as it might and could have? (- but maybe that's just personal preference. However, I really liked that it kind of did link together in the title: Fire, Water, and Dust, but I would have liked to see it linking more in the story too.

I liked the "features a dragon" prompt, even if it took me awhile to realise it was Umbridge :P And that year at Hogwarts, there would rule a dragon with pretty pink talons and the wickedest fire she would ever know. It makes a lot of sense, though I'm not sure if that really 'features' a dragon as it doesn't seem to be an important element of the story, but hopefully it does.

By the way, I'm in love with your banner - the colours, and it's just absolutely gorgeous! All in all, your writing is just brilliant as always, and always enjoyable to read. A really nice fic! :)
- MM

Author's Response: Hey! :3 I'm terrible (TERRIBLE) at canon, so to hear that they sound canon is like a big PHEW moment for me.

That's actually the exact problem I had with this story and why I hesitated in posting it, because I had scrambled to finish this until 15 minutes before the deadline. They totally sound like three different stories to me too, and I am sooort of inclined to fix that in the future, but at the same time, I wrote this on absolutely no muse and ended it with absolutely no muse :P But everyone was posting stories and I wanted to join in ;A;

Baha, I suppose I was hoping, 'Weeell, Umbridge is kind of important because she's the silent big bad in the background' but yes that's like a stretch of stretches. Yoga doing yoga. Thankfully, my own points don't matter xD I was just stubborn about hitting all the prompts.

♥ eee thank you so much for reading!


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