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Review:lauraf68 says:
Hey there, sorry I'm slow at reviewing again. I actually did review since last one I left but somehow didn't send correctly so I hope this gets to you.

I LOVE your story and am glad for the filler details you have been including. Although either I missed the details or you haven't quite explained why Jade has such a large reactionions to some things and now what is happening in the maze and the Goblet of Fire. I feel like she has "adverse reactions" to dark wizards, am I understanding correctly or did I miss something?

I'm so-o-o glad Jade warned Fred about how she may act strange and that he followed her when she did! I feel bad how Ron/Harry/Sirus feel like she may be acting sinister, but am glad that Hermione and Albus are defending her.

Looking forward to next chapter!! Keep up the good work!! Happy Writing!! ~Lauraf68

Author's Response: CERTAIN Dark Wizards. (maybe reread what happens between her and "Moody" after she runs into him?) Over the next few chapters you'll learn which ones and you'll understand why she's acting the way she is during the third task. She doesn't always realize how she's acting odd though, usually not until someone points it out. Like when Snape questioned why she helped Harry get gillyweed.
As for the rest of the third task, it's virtually the same as the book. Victor is the first taken out, despite Harry hearing Fleur scream.
I think Sirius is probably going to be the worse about suspecting Jade. He was a bit of a hypocrite about Snape. I think the same feelings will be transferred over to Jade since she's Bellatrix's daughter (looking like Bellatrix probably doesn't help either)
Side note(slight spoiler...sorta): Sirius is very hard to make likable during the next story. It's bothering me quite a bit. But when you're writing from someone like Jade who is loyal to Snape, I guess Sirius would come off as a jerk. I don't want him to be though, because he is a good person but argh...must work on making Sirius Black likable.

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