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Review:Aphoride says:
Oh my gosh - I have missed this story! It's terrible - I see it's updated on my favourites list, promise myself I'll read it later and then end up forgetting about it and gallivanting off to a concert :P

This chapter was brilliant, as usual. I love Verity's character and how she's slowly becoming a bigger part in the story. She fits in with it so nicely - she seems exactly the type of person who would work in a joke shop and I really hope we see more of her in the future.

Angelina and George... gah, are they together? Are they not? I'm not sure! That's so annoying! ;) It's fine, really, just please let me know one way or another for definite next chapter, because this sort-of-sort-of-not thing is... well... hard. I want to know! They're just so sweet and real and I love how you have George thinking about her because of things and only occasionally. It's not over the top or anything, it's just right. It feels very natural.

Ooh, I noticed a Britishisms thing - 'carry-out' is 'take-away' in England ;)

I adored your imagery in this chapter, as well. The mention of the wire and returning to that, referencing tight-rope walking, was so good, particularly.

By the way, just for the record, after seeing Queen and Adam Lambert in concert yesterday I'm still a little teary at the mention of the name 'Freddie' in conjunction with anything relatively sad. So, yeah, I was a little teary - and I never even get upset, so kudos to you! ;)

This chapter was beautiful, like all the others. Hurrah for rogue bolts of lightening! :D

Aph xx

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