I love it. I LOVE it. I FRIKIN LOVE IT!
10/10 and wow, you really need to do more of these. 'Cause this is the first time I've seen you're writing outside of Being Summer and I literally had no idea you were so talented.
I especially love this part~
Her eyes glowed with anger, hissing silver sparks and crackling with electricity - she looked alive. But the more she lived, the more he died - like she was glowing, but he was fading. She relied on him, and stole his light as she stole his heart.
Wow, okay, if you ever give up writing, I swear I will come and find you. I'm not even close to kidding. Seriously, my face is as stoic as someone on the Internet when they type lol.
Your writing just flowed so well in this, gah, I'm so jealous right now ❤
But you do realize you have to make more of these and update Being Summer, right? 'Kay, just waned to make sure.
Oh, and this is random but the whole time I was thinking of Bellatrix and her husband. They sort of fit when you think about it.
Author's Response: sorry for how long this response took! i've been mega insane busy, but now the holidays have started, so everything is good, my friend. but anyway, i'm glad you like it so much! ahaha, talented? i wouldn't say that :P
that is my favourite bit! out of the whole thing, that was the only little paragraph that i actually felt was any good. i'm not sure why. the last chunk depresses me, though :/.
i have got a really strange image in my head of someone sitting in front of a computer screen with a completley flat expression on their face. that's kind of scary.
ahaha, don't be jealous, you strange one.
i may write another one of these one-shots eventually, because i kind of enjoyed it, and being summer is in the queue right now, and will hopefully be out soon :D
bellatrix and her husband would fit very well! that's one that i never thought of. wow, very perceptive, my friend :D
thank you so much! ellie :) xx