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Review:Tonks1247 says:
Hello!

I was not sure what to expect as I started reading this. I was mildly confused as to why Cho was in the Triwizard tournament, but I’ll tell you now, it was a good thing. That mild confusion drew me into what was going on. I wanted to know more about her journey through the maze, her fight with the dragon that was really a Blast Ended Screwt and the mysterious green mist and just…I wanted to read to figure out what it was going on.

After so long, and I got closer to the end of it, I realized she was probably dreaming but I still wasn’t 100% sure. It was a really good style and plotting of the story because it really did draw me in. It also creatively put all the prompts in it. I also loved how you brought Cedric in at the end, though it really could’ve all just been in Cho’s head…it really was creative and I enjoyed it!

I would suggest doing a quick re-read through, looking at some of the grammar type things [comma usage] and some of the word choice. There were parts that confused me a bit the first time I read the sentence, but after a second read through, I understood.

Other than that though, you did fantastic job! It was an excellent entry for the House Cup task 1! :D

~Grimmerz

Author's Response: Hello there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. I'm sorry that it was confusing. :/ That's disappointing to hear. Maybe when I get the chance to edit it, it will make more sense. I hope so. Thanks again for reviewing, either way.

--Emily

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