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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hey there! It's DarkRose from the forums, here to review. :] First off: thanks for writing us a story over in Ravenclaw House! It was a challenge (I did it too), but I know the whole House appreciates all of our efforts. ;] So! Great story! This is one of the best ones I've read so far, actually! I really loved the tone of this piece. I think it was impressive that you could capture Cho's bitterness. You scorned the world she lives in, but can't escape, as it seems to me. I liked that she DOES love her husband, but I almost feel she would love her solitude and bitterness more. I think you did a great job showing that. The emotions throughout this really moved me. :] Terrific job working in the prompts in new and unique ways. Your idea puts mine to shame. ;] Again, well done, and let's hope we Ravenclaws pull a win in this challenge! :D

--Emily

Author's Response: Hi there! I'm not a big forums resident, but I'm happy to help Ravenclaw and compete and all that. And especially happy to hear that you liked it so much :3 You put it really well, that "she DOES love her husband, but I almost feel she would love her solitude and bitterness more" -- this is exactly the mood I was going for, when I realized where the fic was going. The fact that she does choose to love her husband more than the bitterness speaks highly of her, I think, which I suppose is one of the points of the challenge, to do something positive for your House's champion. I'm so flattered by all this praise and 100% sure I don't deserve it compared to all of the fabulous entries Ravenclaw has, yours included, I'm sure, but thank you for the feedback!

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