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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! It's DarkRose from the forums. :] First off, the banner on your story is gorgeous! Just thought I'd mention that! You made our Ravenclaw sets, right? Those are wonderful too! :D Now, on to the actual story review:

First off--WOW. Really, wow. This was absolutely spectacular. Definitely, by far, the best story I've read for this challenge so far. Wonderful, wonderful job. I loved how you worked in the prompts. I loved the metaphor of Umbridge as a dragon. I adored your style throughout the whole piece. It gave the story a sort of...heavy quality. Weighed-down. Sad. Mourning. Absolutely perfect for the topic. You handled Cho's sorrow wonderfully. I loved the way you wrote about her "fears." The line Aberforth had about "dying with the living" versus "living with the dead" was one of the best lines I've ever read in fanfiction. I'm going to favorite this story once I'm done reviewing (what a rare thing for me to do!). And it earns one of my ridiculously rare 10/10s! You did wonderfully. There's nothing I can suggest on how to improve it. :D You did Ravenclaw proud!

--Emily

Author's Response: I did! Thank you :) It's so fun seeing the set around the forums.

Ahh, I'm so glad you like it :3 I didn't have much of a muse as I wrote this - I just liked the idea of having a story where Cho's life mirrors the Triwizard Tournament - so it was a bit of a struggle to get all the way through it. Aberforth's line is definitely one of my favs, and one of the reasons why I wanted to keep going with this fic.

♥ thank you so much!


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