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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
WOW. This was so amazing. I'm a giant fan of your writing style (even though I don't think I've reviewed a lot of your stories, shame on me :P) and this was flawless. All the action~y bits came together perfectly with Cho's emotions and all the Cedric angst until you created an absolutely incredible one shot. So much love for this ♥

Just super fast, one typo in the third to last paragraph: "even as the dragon’s mouth open" should be opened ;)

Anyways, I absolutely loved the idea of this. Cho facing her memories and Cedric's past this way seems so possible, and gah I absolutely loved it. I love how you continued the links throughout the story, calling Cedric's wand her golden egg and all of that. Amazing. The action sequences and emotional bits were both written impecably, and they balanced each other out really well. I'm in love with your writing in thisss. Even your descriptions of the dragon were gorgeous. Minemineminemine :P

So proud to say this came from a Ravenclaw ♥ Great work!

-Naida

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so so much! Don't worry about it - that compliment was lovely enough! :) Well, given the task was about Cho I had to include some Cedric-related angst (because, really, no Cho piece is totally complete without it, I don't think) and the action just sort of pushed its way in.

Ooh, yes, thank you for spotting that! I'm planning on editing things next month, so I'll edit that in. Thanks for that!

I really wanted to link the task to the actual tournament in some way, since it was so similar and things, and well, this is what came out of that. Haha, I think the Cedric's wand = her golden egg thing could have been a bit clearer... it was something completely random. I needed her to have a golden egg-type thing and I wanted her to have Cedric's wand as well, so it all kinda slotted together neatly. Thank you so so much! You may have the dragon, lol.

Thank you so so much for this lovely review!

Aph xx

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