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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Aditi,

Wow! This Narcissa point of view was so very good. You had me reading very fast as she ran to her baby son.

I loved how you paralleled the 1st war with the 2nd. She only cared about her son in the end, so it makes complete and logical sense that she felt the same from the start.

You really surprised me with that bogart... great twist there.

And... PERFECT patronus for Lucius! He's so proud and enjoys strutting about (and they are on the lawn at MM). LOL! I truly enjoyed that bit of genius.

This was very suspenseful and had me on the edge of my seat.

I think my favorite 'awe' moment was the very last line, how she hoped "...Draco may have a future devoid of darkness." ;( Awe... because we know he had to.

Great job. Go Slytherin!

Dark Whisper
P.S. I LOVE your A/N. So true about strict canon-folk pointing out the obvious "flaws." I get that a lot myself. 10/10

Author's Response: Hey DarkWhisper,

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! I am glad you liked the Narcissa point of view. Haha, I wrote that part quite fast too :P

Yeah I always thought of Narcissa as a very motherly person, and I always thought of her as someone who would keep her son first, so yeah I kind of paralleled the 2 wars. Glad you liked it.

And what's a story without some drama? I just had to put in the boggart twist there, glad it worked if it surprised you :)

As for Lucius' patronus, I always thought that if he may have had one, it might have been a peacock since it sort of matches his personality, plus as you pointed out, peacocks are always outside Malfoy Manor xD

I am happy that you liked the story overall, that you found it suspenseful, and that you found the ending sweet :)

Go slytherin yeah! :D

And yeah, about the A/N, I get quite a lot of reviews telling me canon things I already know (I mean just because I didn't use them in my story doesn't mean I don't know them) so I decided to put that little note!

Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing once again!


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