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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Athene,

Wow. This was a wonderful read. Your descriptions were incredible. It was like I was there with him riding horseback through that scary forest. Excellent, beautiful job!

The first heir being raised by Godric was heartbreaking and very interesting twist to have in your story.

It is really touching that Salazar lives with his regrets and is saddened to hear of his old friend.

I love how you used the wand as well. That was genius!

Great work. Go Slytherin!
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I think I may have lost some of the descriptions as the story went on and became dialogue-focused, but I'm glad I set the scene well enough for you!

I do love a good twist, and I thought, Slytherin must have had kids in order to have an heir. Who would have looked after them if he disappeared? And Godric was the obvious answer. It reminded me of Harry and Sirius as godfathers, almost.

Thanks for all of your lovely comments, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Go Slytherin!
Athene xo


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