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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! It's DarkRose from the forums. :]

Well done with this entry for the Task One Challenge! I think you did Ravenclaw proud! So far, this is one of the best I've read. I absolutely loved how dramatic this story was. I was a bit confused as to why Cho had Cedric's wand and what "one task down, two more to go" meant. Other than that, though, I think this was brilliant. Cho's characterization was wonderful You really focused well on which aspects of her emotions would show here. I liked that a lot. You also did a terrific job of describing all of the scenes and everything going on. I could really imagine it. :] Great job! 'Claws for the Cup! :D

--Emily

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I wrote it in about three hours, so I didn't think it would do well or be particularly good, so thank you! Haha, sorry about that! Things I write end up being more confusing than they're really supposed to be, I don't know why... I really enjoyed writing Cho in this. I think she's often portrayed as kinda whiny and wimpy because of how Harry sees her in the books, but I wanted to show more than that and I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you very much for the review! :)

Aph xx


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