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Review:LunarLuna says:
aww, you've done it again Liz! :) I haven't read too many of your stories but you're the reference when it comes to Harry/Ginny xD This was soft and sweet and the concept of opposites was interesting and beautiful. Kinda like the poems I like to write but in longer, clearer and more elaborate xD

The only thing I would suggest is shortening up the end. The part when she explains how much Tom has hurt her and how Harry has healed her. I love it don't get me wrong, but it ends up being slightly repetitive towards the end, so I would just make it A LITTLE shorter ;)

Other than that, I thought it was amazingly cute. :) No need to tell you how well you portray Harry and Ginny, you've probably been told numerous times already! ;)

You make me want to write Harry/Ginny xD I might :P If you're willing to give me few tips xD The only bit of that ship I've ever written is a short Song Fic (which i think was actually written with your help...? If I remember well. :P)

Anyhow, this was a great read! Sorry for not full-filling my review swap duties earlier! xD

xxx

-June

PS: you wrote "beated" instead of "beta'd" in your summary xD Just signaling the typo :P

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't know was the reference was me, but that makes me happy inside and out :) I didn't know you like to write poems, that's so cool!

Thanks for the advice, I was wondering if it was getting a bit long, it just for some random reason feels like I'm cheating if it's less than 1,000 words.

Thank you, and even though I have, it feels wonderful every time I hear it again.

Yes! I remember that, that was such a long time ago, I would love to help you whenever you need it, just pop over and ask.

Thank you so much,

Lizzie

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