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Review:luciusobsessed says:
OH MY GOD I'M DYING! THERE'S SO MUCH I HAVE TO SAY!

First of all, let me start with the fact that I love this forbidden love theme, because I, in a way, am in a similar situation. I love love love reading about it and relating to it!

Second, Ted's love for her is so pure, and I'm desperately dying for her to accept him for everything he is. It's not fair that he has to suffer, and it's not fair that she has to suffer either. She is suffering more, I think, because she doesn't realize that if she makes her parents happy, she won't be happy herself. If she does marry Rabastan, she will suffer for it in the future and regret throwing Ted away.

Third, Lucius/Narcissa are my FAVORITE pairing! I have a one-shot written, and I'm currently writing another fanfic based on them. Anyways, my point is that I squealed in excitement when I came upon them in this chapter. It gave a more open view of their relationship, and I love how Lucius is open with Narcissa to the point where he expresses his fears and concerns with her. Great job on portraying that.

Lastly, I'm so so so so so terrified as to what's going to happen when Lucius and Narcissa tell on Andromeda. I can only imagine the horrible things that will happen in Andromeda's life, and I think that will be her breaking point, during which she will realize she loves Ted and wants to be with im, and will therefore go back to him!

I love your story so much and can't wait for the next chapter! Your writing has improved so much, and so have your descriptions. Please please please update son xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review, it's so encouraging to know people are out there enjoying my writing!

I am absolutely loving the challenges of writing forbidden love. I'd explored it before in my Next Gen fix, but this story has enabled me to develop my characters in relation to the theme.

I feel a bit bad about making them suffer, but it's all part of the process. I also want to create a contrast between Lucius/Narcissa and Andromeda/Ted. I think, in some small way, Lucius and Narcissa are fighting for their relationship too.

My next chapter is written and I am uploading it now! I'm glad you enjoy my story and please keep reading!!

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