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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

This was a really well-written piece. You have a natural talent for writing, and in this, all the action was intense and exciting, your Cho was really well characterised and the plot worked out really well with the story. I like the idea of 'Reliving', it seems very plausible as something Cho would do. I just want to make sure of something (am i right?): initially I thought this was a real story - Cho actually visiting a dragon reserve, but then Cedric's wand.. it makes me come to the conclusion that it's just a very elaborate dream. The good thing about that is that it's ambiguous to the readers and leaves us thinking.

I liked the way you incorporated the prompts - it was incorporated quite well. In summary, it's very good quality writing, and a generally engaging fic to read :)

- MM

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I wanted to tie the idea of Cho looking for a dragon back to the original tournament somehow, without copying what happened there, so this is sort of what come out of that. When I wrote, I thought of it as real, but looking back over it, it does seem very ambiguous... I dunno, take it however you want, I guess! :P I don't mind!

Thanks! I sort of felt like I was just flinging them in when I was writing it, so I'm so glad you thought they worked!

Thank you so much for this lovely review!

Aph xx

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