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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I thought this was a great one-shot. Honestly, dreams seem to be a common plot, but I really liked how Cho was the champion, and how she was the one in the twisted maze encountering the blast-ended skrewt/dragon, and foe-glass/dark detectors table. You incorporated the prompts pretty well, and the whole story feels plausible and realistic. I think your Cho is also nicely characterised - it definitely feels like her anyway.

I kind of feel like you need a break between the dream and reality - though it's easy enough to distinguish, it sort of just runs straight to the next part. However, that just might be personal preference on my part. All in all, I did enjoy this - it was a really well-written dream :)

- MM

Author's Response: Hey there!

Thank you for reading and reviewing for me! I'm really glad that you liked the story. :] This was definitely unique in my writing...I've never done anything quite like it. So...it was challenging. I actually debated about putting in a break, but I decided against it. I'll go and look at that again and see if it would make more sense. :] I almost feel like I copped out making it a dream, but I couldn't think how else to do it. :/ Anyhow, thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

--Emily


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