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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I really liked this! :) I thought it was a great plot, and it seemed entirely plausible as well. Having Cho visit her friend - who is not there - at a dragon reserve made for quite the interesting story. The only plot thing that is slightly questionable in my mind is why she didn't just disapparate from the start.. but it was part of the plot at the end so I guess you can't really change that.

I loved the way you included all the prompts - it was done really well and didn't stand out that much. The writing itself is also of a very high quality - I really felt like I was in the moment, and your Cho is well done too. A really enjoyable story! :)

- MM

Author's Response: Ooh o.O I did not think of that. (That just goes to show that I would've /probably/ died in that situation) I suppose she was panicking too much to think of it at the time? I love seeing everyone's Cho and they're all so different so I'm quite glad you liked mine :) Thanks for reviewing, and see you around the forums! W.W.W.W.W!

- Linn


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