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Review:javct says:
Hi there!

I've been reading a lot of founders as of late and they've all been amazing, this one was no different. I, personally, ship Godric/Rowena and Salza/Helga (and I'm a stickler for my ships) but this was good; I think that I am slowly warming up to Rowena/Salazar :D

I loved this story, it's always nice to see a human side of Salazar because in a lot of founders stories, he is portrayed as an emotionless person which really annoys me! So kudo's for writing a brilliant Salazar!

The only thing that I noticed was the speech, it seemed very modern. It's fan fiction so I suppose that it doesn't matter to much but when you're a writing in this era (be it a OS or FF) don't use conjunctions so can't would be cannot and don't would be do not.

Overall, a great story!!
Jas

Author's Response: Okay thanks! I hadn't (had not xD) even thought about that!! :D So thanks for the little tip! ;) I've never written/read founders before so it's nice to get a few tricks :) I'll edit it and fix that! :)

And I'm really glad you liked my Salazar!! :D And that you're warming up to Rowena/Salazar ;) Though Helga/Salazar is a fun ship as well, I prefer Godric/Helga personally... not really Godric/Rowena though... the way I picture them it wouldn't quite work out :P

Anyhow, sorry for my babble! ;) Glad you enjoyed and thanks again for your kind review!! :)

xxx

-June


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