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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here with your review! :D Sorry it has taken a while...the HC and all has been getting in the way.

First things first...I'm super glad you updated this! I've been looking forward to know what happens.

Scene I

I absolutely love Remus here. He's not as fragile as sometimes he's made out to be. He actually stands up to Sirius and treats him as his equal rather than someone who is afraid of losing his friendship. Does that make sense? He has an attitude, I guess that's what I'm trying to say. Nonetheless, the way you portray him when he's telling Sirius that his family banished him to the woods, I just wanted to hug him.

Scene II

Cissy and Bella here are fantastic. Their personality really fits the ones from the books but somehow they're twisted in way to fit the setting of your story.

Yay! Cissy saw Lucius! I like how Evan gets jealous of the idea of Cissy actually being interested in Lucius. I would've, however, liked to see a bit of Andromeda as well. What she was wearing, what she thought of her father becoming 'king'. Any feelings towards Sirius' departure. That's my only small CC on it.

Got a question...you're basing this on Hamlet, right? Is one of the sisters based on Ophelia? Just wondering because if you are...then one of them is going to have a tragic death.

Scene III

I really like this section. Specially the part where the guy about news from the castle. It just goes to show that you're really thinking things through. The 'commoners' would definitely see the parties that the royals are throwing as a waste of money. Their tax money at that, I suppose. We still see that nowadays when the people get angry when the royals spend tremendous amount of money on a wedding or trip. I really hope Sirius learns a lot of things regarding his kingdom when he comes back to take it back. At least...I hope he does!

Another question! Seems I'm filled with those...but are we going to see our beloved Marauders grown or is Sirius going to re-claim his throne at a young age?

Scene IV

Molly here is a sweetheart. She reads the same as the Molly we know but for some odd reason I like yours better than the one in the books. Will she meet Arthur or was that the husband she lost?

Scene V

I really enjoyed the James/Sirius interaction here. Glad that James told him why he's being that way with him. And he's right...if he wants to survive, he needs to toughen up...Your last line, however, really got me wondering...what is James' story?

Overall, this was another great chapter and I look forward to reading more of what's going to happen!

Thanks for re-requesting! :D

--Perelandra/Rosie

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