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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi! I wandered over here from the Slytherin Common Room and just wanted to say that I like your story a lot! I like getting to see young versions of Gryffindor and Slytherin, their friendship seems believable despite their differences. I like that the story prompts are worked in in a very natural way, as well.

The one critique I have is that the way the dialog is formatted within the paragraphs makes it sometimes difficult to tell who is saying what. Breaking the dialog out into separate paragraphs would fix this.

Great job overall! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. I'll go back and look at the dialogue format, Thank you for pointing it out. :)

Sam.


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