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Review:Debra20 says:
You left me totally speechless! I can't even being to tell you HOW vivid and colourful your description is. From the whole dragon scene, through the converging Dementors to Neville returning victorious it was impossible not to imagine every single detail you filled the story with. Lovely!

The scenario you thought for this story and the way you fitted all the prompts in was incredibly ingenious. Absolutely none of them felt crammed just for the sake of having them. I just love reading action/adventure stories and yours was filled with that. Beginning to the end. So you just made my day happier :D

A great pleasure to read this entry!

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)

I really enjoyed writing the dragon scene. I wanted to make it sort of lighthearted because dragons usually bring violence to mind, with sword-wielding and all that, so it was amusing for me to make a dragon laugh. I think Neville would've preferred a more harmless approach, as well. And then the dementors...eek. I think I would've been more like Harry in that situation and fallen off my broom, but Neville handled it like a pro. ^ ^

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

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