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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think you found a really wonderful way to incorporate the prompts, I love that you used Neville as a dragon. I, like you, wanted to find a different way to incorporate the dragon without it being a beast that someone would have to fight off. So it was really nice to read a story that used him metaphorically.

Frank and Alice are a tragedy, and I love that you let that shine through with this. Two people that lost everything, but were still stuck prisoners of their own bodies. They always make my heart a bit mushy, so think you for bringing them into this through Frank's letter.

I think you did a wonderful job with Neville, he's a bit of a mystery to me and I find him difficult to write, but you really pulled through with this!

Amazing entry m'dear, I'm so happy you were able to finish it in time!

Jami (Go Gryffindor!)

Author's Response: Awww thanks Jami :D I actually wrote a fighting off a dragon sort of story but I didn't like it at all. So this was a random idea that came into my head while I was going to College in the bus :D I'm so glad you like it. I'm still reading through all the stories and I'm glad I've written something out of the box. I don't know ho else has but I'm still reading :D Thanks a million for the review :)


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