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Review:Jchrissy says:
This is such a sad, sad, sad concept! I should be able to think of a few synonyms for sad, but really, that's exactly what it was!

Anyway, I was wondering the whole way through what was wrong with Neville. Was he just recovering? How did he end up there? And all. I like that you used Lloyd to tell his story, it was a very creative idea.

It's so heartbreaking that Neville more or less ended up in the same place his parents were for the majority of their life :(. It is such a heartbreaking concept, you did an amazing job telling his story.

Great entry! I'm so excited to see all the variety coming from our house!

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted it to be told from an outsider's point of view to make it a little more creepy and unnerving, and to not give the game away right at the start. And yes, there's definitely a bit of irony there - the poor Longbottoms :(

Thank you for your review! :)


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