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Review:CambAngst says:
Hey, Beeezie! I'm trying to read and review all of these before I vote.

Very interesting. I like the idea of Neville the Auror, hero of the Second Wizarding War, still not 100% sure whether his school friends are messing with him.

Your plot was really interesting, and it made for a very natural way to incorporate the prompts. It's always fun to see the canon characters stretching themselves and being put into new and unusual situations. I also liked the way that you characterized the dragon research bureau. I could definitely see them being secretive and somewhat stand-offish toward the rest of the Ministry.

The only one of your prompts I wasn't completely sure about was the wand details. You mention that it's a good wand for an Auror, but not the exact wording of "good for defensive spells". I have no idea how that will be graded. Let's hope for the best!

Overall, nice job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for r&r-ing. :)

I'm really glad you liked this, and that you felt like I worked the prompts in naturally. I was worried about doing that and not making it feel forced and awkward, for fairly obvious reasons. :P

And yeah, the wand details weren't exact - I actually had them that way, but it felt... well, a bit forced and awkward, and then I saw that someone had asked in the House Cup forum about whether the details all needed to be specifically mentioned, and one of the staff said that you just needed most of them.

Thank you again for the review, and I'm sorry it took me awhile to respond.

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