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Review:Sam says:
The plot line for this story is great. However, the dialogue and the speed at which your story progresses is rushed. I would love it if you went back and looked at the actual books for the personalities of all the characters involved. You keep fluctuating between different personalities for each character. Blaise would never betray Draco because they were too close. The betrayer should've been Crabbe or Goyle. Hermione would not have been so quick to forgive Draco; things like that. Also, your dialogue comes across a bit blunt, and lacks details, and so does the surroundings. Please try and correct these things so that it'll

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