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Review:potterfan310 says:
Oh my god I actually love you right now. I thought this was ever going to be updated and I'm so glad it has *Happy dance*

I love Dom and how you've characterized her. Her personality is amazing and she is so lovable :D The same goes for Fred. He's fun, kind, sweet andf had a wicked sense of humour :)

I think it's brill that they are all different ages, like Roxy being a toddler instead of the same age as Lily, Hugo, Lucy and Louis. Also Roxy is too cute ♥

I like how youv'e portayed James as well, he's sensitive and sweet instead of arrogant and up himself. I also think he and Sarah make a good couple, it shows his good side.

I was re-reading this last night so Correct me if I'm wrong but in chapter five:Torn Dom's middle name is Nymphadora?

I look forward to the next chapter. Dom looking after a baby wayy before her little on is born, should be fun :)

I love this story, keep it up. ♥
10/10
-Potterfan310

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