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Review:Debra20 says:
Wow! Just wow! This has got to be one of the saddest stories I ever read. It's just incredibly creative how you managed to slip in the prompts without actually forcing them in. Not to mention the creativity and voice of the piece.

You just can't help but cry for Neville. I got very attached to him while reading the books, and more now with this year's House Cup. If this were canon it would be so so unfair for him. He does deserve a happy resolve and well in canon he got it. Masterfully done!

And Lloyd! I love Lloyd - from his detective name to his detective character he's such a well rounded OC: he stops to listen to Neville even when he starts speaking of something other than the case he was interested in. You managed so much in just less than 2000 words. Love it to bits!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you for such a huge compliment! I really loved writing this so it seems to have come across here. I wanted to write some sort of AU 'parallel universe' ending for Neville, and yes, if it were canon I would feel for him! Lloyd was very fun to write too, so I'm glad you liked him.

Thank you for your wonderful review! :)


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