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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Hello! It's Laura from TGS - just thought I'd drop by and nose around on your authors page :)

This was so awesome, and I really, really enjoyed it! You created this awesome image of Cho - headstrong, determined, but still nursing a faded hurt. I love that we finally get to see how gutsy and passionate she is. I guess previously she's always been masked in a girlishness because of Harrys crush on her. I love Cho and Cedric as a couple, too, and you captured her feelings about him so very very well here.

The action, too, was so intense, and everything you described had me itching with anticipation - I just wanted here to be safe! I'm so bad at anything remotely actiony haha, so high five for you, for making this so effective. Your choice of words was so brilliant, even little things like 'thrashing' and such. It makes this piece so much more animated! And also, well done on addressing the prompts! I'm not really a part of the House Cup this year - kinda wish I was - but I think you did a super job here :)

See you later! :D

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Hey Laura! Feel free to nose around all you like! :)

I'm glad you liked how I wrote Cho because I wasn't sure at the beginning if I'd made her a little too strong. When I thought about it, though, we don't really see much of her in the books. We know she's pretty, clever, dates Cedric and Harry and defends her friend and cries a lot the year after Cedric dies. Well... that's actually fairly normal, you know? I wanted to sort of explore her a bit more than that and this kinda just came out. Cho and Cedric! Oh, they're so perfect, I agree! :D

Thank you so much! I hadn't written a single action scene for ages before I wrote this, so I was a little worried about it... particularly the dragon. I mean, it's a dragon. It burns things. And eats things O.o Not much there to work with...

Thank you so so much for the lovely review - and hopefully you'll be part of the House Cup next year! :)

Aph xx


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