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Review:ohmymerlin says:
~this is from the Hufflepuff review thread~
This seems really interesting, I quite like it :)
I'm a bit confused about the whole thing, will it all just end up meeting together at the end?
(if it's spoilers don't tell me!)
There's just one thing, you ted to go overboard on your periods, take this as an example:
"Do you want to. would you like to come home with me afterwards?"
instead you could write/type;
"Do you want to... would you like to come home with me afterwards?"
it just looks a bit neater, but that's the only thing I wanted to really pin-point
it's a really good story, I think I'll add it to my favourites :D
10/10 :D

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing. yeah, it sort of seems really confusing in the beginning but the characters do come together at some point in the story, their lives sort of intertwine
thanks on the advice about the periods, i will try to work on it :)

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