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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums. I've been reviewing all the Task One entries. :] So! Yours was great! You definitely did Ravenclaw proud! I liked the fact that Cho wasn't actually supposed to be anywhere near the dragons, yet she stumbled there on accident. It made the story that much more exciting, since the readers know she's not qualified to be there. I also liked the way you worked in the prompts, especially all the ones about dragons. :] They flowed nicely. If you ever edit this, the one thing I might change if I were you would be to add in even more details. It was so fast-paced that there didn't seem to be time to describe all of Cho's emotions, fears, etc., let alone the setting and all. I had a pretty good idea of how everything looked, but details always help me envision things better. :] All-in-all, I think this story was great. Good job with Cho's character! I liked that she wasn't too "Gryffindor-ish." She was still a calculating 'Claw. :D Congratulations on such a nice story!

--Emily

Author's Response: Hi, there, Emily! Did I? All the prompts were surprisingly easy to work in, especially the dragons, of course, which was weird because I didn't think I could make it or anything :p I'm glad I did, though, because I'm quite proud of this one-shot *squishes* I think one day I'll go back to this - and some of my other stories, too - and add in some things and fix others, like the description in this one. There were so many takes on Cho's character so I'm glad you liked my one! Thanks for reviewing, and see you around the forums! Go, go, Ravenclaw!

--Linn


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