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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
I just stumbled upon this, and wowzers. It was so simple, but complex at the same time -- complex in a way that a living and breathing organism is in it's essence, just an organism, but in it's entirety cells and systems all coordinated to work together. THAT is the sort of understanding that sits between Harry and Ginny here and it's really quite beautiful. There were two lines in particular that stood out to me and made me reread them b/c they were that good:

He smells like sadness and she sucks it in, so that maybe he wont have to.
^^ that paints such a lovely image of Ginny as Harry's anchor and refuge, as his strength.


He just wants to be someones hero again.
^^ OMG. I just, no words. That's so sad and so beautiful and gah. I'm drowning in a pool of feels.

This was an amazing one shot and I hope that you are proud of it.

Author's Response: I've definitely never had anyone compare a story of mine to an organism, so thank you! I understand what you mean about simplicity and complexity, and I'm glad that I managed to pull that off here and you liked it so much :D Please don't drown! And thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm always most proud of the most recent thing I've written, so I am proud of this - for now (;

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