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Review:angel_speaks says:
Emesias here with your requested review!
As promised, here's you full- on review ^_^

Grammar/ spelling: None that I can spot ^_^ very good job on this part!

Characters: I'm loving how they are developing so far. Their personalities are highlighted and consistent with their dialogue and actions. They're well described so I, as the reader, can vividly picture them as well as the things that they do!

Plot/ flow: As I had shared in the first chapter, you have a very interesting plot going on here! So far it is going quite well in terms of development and flow. I'm loving the impact of the main influence of this story ^_^ Good job!

Happy Writing! 10/10

Author's Response: Hey, thanks again for reading all these chapters. :)

You can thank my fabulous betas for the nice job on the spelling and grammar. They're fantastic.

Oh good. The characters are definitely want drives this entire plot forward so I'm glad you're finding them consistent. Descriptions are definitely something I love to write so I hope to continue to improve in that aspect and make my writing even better.

Glad the plot is working for you and the flow, as well! There's always a concern if it's going too slow or too fast, etc. so it's important for me to get feedback on how readers take it.

Thanks again. These were very nice reviews. :)

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