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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Hello, fellow Gryffindor!

Wow, what an action-packed story! This was fantastic insight into Hogwarts circa Deathly Hallows while the Carrows were in command. Neville and Hannah's near miss with them was exciting and full of suspense. I like how you chose to view the situation through Hannah's eyes instead of Neville's, as it sets this story apart from most of the other Gryffindor entries. I really love Neville's spunk here, telling off the Carrows. He's so brave and feisty! I also adored the description of the House hangings and how it looked like the badger and lion were hugging. My favorite part, however, was their much-deserved happily-ever-after, with the Muggle church wedding to honor Hannah's mother, and the life stirring inside her. A little secret that the readers know about before Neville does. :)

Really, really well done. I enjoyed reading this.

Gryffindor ftw!

Author's Response: WOO GO LIONS!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the action, it's my favourite genre, and then I also loved the fluff of the ending :)

Thanks so much for the review!


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