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Review:angel_speaks says:
Emesias here with your requested review!

Aww poor Molly! This is a pretty good start!

Grammar/ Spelling: I think you're good with this part. I didn't spot anything that is alarming so good job!

Characterization: I like how you've set up your Molly character. She seems to have a lot of potential and seems to be quite a promising character. I can't wait to see how she develops throughout the chapters ^_^

Plot/ flow: Like I have said, I think that you are off to a good start here. The first chapter seems to be written in a way that would be open for anything to happen. I'm really excited to see what you have in store ^_^ As for the flow, so far its going well, but I'm going to have to go through the rest of the chapters to really know for sure.

Overall, good job! ^_^

Happy Writing! 9/10

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! My beta and I have been working dillegently on spelling and grammar, so thats wonderful news. I'm really happy you like Molly, I have lots of plans for her! Thanks again for the review!

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