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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Hello, fellow Gryffindor!

I very much enjoyed this story! It's definitely one of my favorite entries that I've read. I really want to commend you on the way you wove in the prompts, because you did it with such skill. It flowed well and none of the prompts stuck out; they were all very natural, especially with the dragon's blood. Out of all the prompts, I think that the dragon's blood one has the most tendency to stick out to the reader, but you listed them in such a natural way. You should definitely be proud of that! I love Enid and little Neville. He's so adorable. :) Poor thing, living with Augusta. She's definitely as scary as a dragon!

One thing I caught:
Neville's eyes sprang open with feat

I think you meant 'fear'. ;)

Overall, this was a very cute, entertaining story, and I'm so glad I read it!

Gryffindor ftw!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for the review!!!
That was the one thing I think we were all worried about more than how many we got in (well, I certainly was anyway :P), so I am really glad I seem to have done it well! The dragon's blood was the one I worried about most because it did feel like a list, but I just hoped it sounded natural with how you would talk to a child!
Ooh, thank you for pointing that out! I've edited it now :)


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