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Review:charlottetrips says:
Ah, I love that it ended on such a hopeful note. Thank you for doing that. After the varying degrees of sadness and hopelessness in the story, it was good to have that in the end.

The way you displayed the nightmare was very nightmarish-like. It was random and slightly non-sequitur but not entirely, in that dreamlike way that nightmares have a way of being. I could feel Choís confusion. I liked that she didnít realize it was a dream until the very end despite how random it was. Iíve felt like that before.

A nice submission!

xChar

Author's Response: Hey Char!

Thanks for reviewing this! I'm very glad you liked it and that you think I did well. :] I've never written anything even remotely similar, so it was a challenge for sure. I'm glad you thought the nightmare was believable as such. Thanks again!

--Emily


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