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Review:charlottetrips says:
I like how you just drop the reader into the middle of some action. It was fun trying to figure out what was happening and where we were going with the story. At first I was like, is she breaking into Gringotts (with the mention of the bank) or is she out in some far flung field mission as an Auror, etc. You had me thinking which was fun :)

One of the things Iím enjoying in reading all our ĎClaw Task One submissions is the different takes we have on Cho. She was a character that I didnít have many good thoughts about in the books for whatever reasons but in reading through these stories, Iím starting to like her more so than because of our awesome sig :P What I like about your Cho is that she seems more mature and grown up than before and doesnít seem to be hung up on Harry or Cedric all that much and is her own person.

xChar

Author's Response: Dropping the reader into action is different for me o.O I usually start off a few scenes /before/ the action, so this was new for me, but making the readers think was worth it ;) We could all use some 'Claw-ish tendencies, no? In my two drafts, Cho had always been out-of-Hogwarts-age - a grown-up, eighteen or nineteen'ish and getting over Harry and Cedric, so that was probably why she seems more mature and stuff, and I'm glad you picked up on that :) Thanks for the review, Char, and see you around the forums! W.W.W.W.W!

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