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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Hello, fellow Gryffindor!

I love the premise of this! I've never read a story that explained what happened when Neville, Ginny, and co. ransacked Snape's office looking for the sword. I thought you told it very well, weaving in suspense and action and all of the prompts. I especially thought that your use of the Sleeping Draught prompt was well-done; it blended in seamlessly with the story. I think my favorite thing, however, was Dumbledore's portrait and your portrayal of Snape. Ginny probably attributes getting off with only detentions with Hagrid to luck, but of course it must be more than that. Ahh, Snape, putting up with hatred hitting him from all sides when he can't tell anyone that he's actually working on Dumbledore's orders.

Great job! Gryffindor ftw

Author's Response: Sarah! It feels great to have you read my little entry!

I'm very glad you liked how I used my prompts. I'm actually very surprised by how every scene struck me. They came one by one which is most unusual because I always felt I had to 'prepare' all the story. This one was more spontaneous :)

You don't know how happy I am that you enjoyed my portrayal of Snape and the others. It means a lot to me because characterisation is one of the things I worry most about when writing a story.

Thanks a bunch for the wonderful review!


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