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Review:natalieee says:
i think it's great that you're trying different writing styles, because this one is definately not like the one you usually do haha.
this isn't really my type of fanfiction, but i thought that i would give it a go because you're my favourite author. i'm not really the type of person to give proper feedback since i suck at writing but love reading, but i think you did a really good job capturing all the emotions flying around.
don't laugh at me if i get this wrong, but was the chick dominique? It was just kinda like silvery hair and a beauty, so i thought, oh its gotta be a veela. I'm sorry if i got it wrong. :)
I thought this was really really awesome, even though it's not my style! I thought you did an awesome job, no need to be nervous! :) natalie xoxo
P.s. My writing style being your other ff being summer. XD. When it said summer in this one-shot, i was like, 'SUMMER?! SUMMER'S IN THIS STORY?! YUUSSS!!!' then i read the next word... flower. Devo for me. Anyway, i'm really excited for the next chapter of BS... Hahaha BS meaning being summer :)

Author's Response: ahaha, well i'm not really trying different writing styles, i don't think... because i would never in a million years write a whole story like this. it was strange enough just writing a one-shot in this style.
this is not my favourite type of fanfic either, and i usually avoid them like the plague. i don't like all the fancy~language and thought~provoking mumbo jumbo. i'd rather read humour. but for some reason, i started writing this and then wanted to put it up, so i wanted to be there. you give really good feedback, silly :P
ahaha, yes. it doesn't have to be dominique, but that was the kind of person that i was picturing when i was writing the thing. yeah, the silvery hair thing was a reference to the veela.
thank you so much! you're really lovley, and i really appreciate it :D

ellie :) xx

ps. my writing style is the kind of thing that i write in being summer ~ that's what i feel comfortable writing. oh good lord... wishful thinking there, love. but the next chapter of being summer will be in the queue very soon :D


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