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Review:MagicalInk says:
Hey there!
Well this was a a great first chapter, especially as the story promises to be an angst-y one. This fluff just makes us think everything was too perfect.

I like that you're giving us a new take on Petunia. Lately, a lot I characters have been dug in but this was something I had yet to see! And it's quite realistic, which makes it all better. The older sibling is the one that suffers more from jealousy, suddenly being ripped of his 'only child' title and the younger needing more attention. It is a really complex spot you're working on and I can't wait to see how you keep it! Usually, this jealousy fades off around the age of 6, but with Petunia's skeptical character, I can totally see it lasting longer.

I really love your descriptions. I'm always searching for a story in which the author paints us the atmosphere, and then you can imagine some other details. Your scenario was so well written I could feel the cold without you mentioning it, and I really loved the snowflake imagery!

I'm adding this to my favorites, can't wait to see what's next!
Val

Author's Response: Val, you're amazing. Because this review totally made my day! :D

The reason I'm writing this is so that the reader can have a different view on Petunia, and maybe even soften up to her a bit. I know all about sibling jealousy, so I can relate to her.

I am so happy you liked my descriptions! Lately, that's what I've been struggling with and it's a huge relief that I managed to do that!

Thank you so much for the review and favorite, and I'm so glad you're liking this so far! :)

~Rosie


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