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Review:Ardeith says:
I think I'm the first to review! I love your Severus chapters and his wonderful snarky voice. Here were some of my favorite parts...

Severus on toddler stuff ("an assortment of snacks for him to choose from (even though he had just eaten, and it was somewhat likely Lavinia and Henry kept food in their house), and his “Conjure-A-Nursery” expandable cot that he had never actually once slept in.")

and Severus on "Black" ("The less time I had to stew in the seeping discontent of Black, who had not even bothered to glace our way yet, the better." was just one of my favorites.)

I wonder what is on Avrille's mind though? Guess we will find out next chapter.

Author's Response: You are! I think people were thrown by the fact that I actually got this one written so quickly ;) The next one won't be quite so speedy since I'm away visiting family for 9 days and didn't want to force myself to write, but I'll be back on it as soon as I'm home.

Severus on toddler stuff was great. I kind of thought what my own husband must think when I pack for us to all go somewhere since my kid is Char's age here. He doesn't see the point of bringing a diaper bag when he's going food shopping up the street, but I constantly think, "What if you break down? What if the store loses power and you're locked inside?!" Stuff like that. So yeah, Avrille's a bit over the top, but you really can't blame her with all the crazy stuff going on in the world. Sometimes the snacks you pack for your baby are the only things you can control.

I loved FINALLY being able to write Severus's thoughts on Sirius. We got enough of Sirius's stupid immaturity in the books, so I thoroughly enjoyed showing that character from someone else's perspective besides Harry who worshipped him.

You'll definitely find out what's up with Avrille next chapter. Nothing earth-shattering, but it's all leading up to something coming later on down the road. Thanks so much for the review! I always look forward to yours :) ~Renny


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