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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Oh, this was delightful, Jenny!!

Such a unique take on your House Champion... poor Longbottom family can't catch a break. I loved that you created a reasonably well fleshed-out OC for this story. He sounds fab -- and he must be fit. He works out, after all. :P I was very intrigued by neville's fate and was completely invested in the story he told, never really questioning its truth or validity, and then BAM. Smacked upside the face by the sad, sad truth of it all.

This is a great entry and a fantastic story. :)

Author's Response: Hi, and thank you Melissa! Lloyd was sort of created on a whim so I had to pull out his details very quickly, but he is a bit of fun. I'm glad the ending got you, it was definitely supposed to be a shock ending!

Thank you for your review lovely!

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