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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

Guess who is back to review more of this amazing story? Why, its me! I'm sure you'd already noticed, so that was completely unnecessary but here it is. I was, as always, glad to see you back with this and I am so proud of Pansy! She took her NEWTs! She somehow reminded me of how I'd taken my SAT here in the States and I could completely relate to her. And the mystery that is Bennett is back! I must know what he is up to with her and what he wants, but I know you'll be getting to that eventually. Anyway, I was rather glad that you had shown some slight changes in the Ministry and I really enjoyed the brief attitude you gave us of Pansy's father, regarding her presence there in the past. I'm sure she felt a bit of a thrill, underneath it all that she had came, succeeded and done her best at something that had made her so nervous in the past. Phew! Also, I'm glad that you hadn't exactly stopped using Draco's name in this story, given what happened a few chapters ago, I'm curious to see how she'll eventually weed him out of her life. First love is hard to get rid of though but are we going to expect some romance soon for her? I'm sure she'd scoff at me for even suggesting that but I really am anxious for her future and can't wait for more. Update soon please! :D
Much love,

Author's Response: Thanks so much once again for reviewing! I always enjoy reading your thoughts on the story!

I'm glad that you're continuing to enjoy the story and Pansy's progress. She's finally written her N.E.W.T.s and yes, while she is proud of herself for doing so, she's also nervous because it means that she now has to move on with the next stage of her plan.

And yes, you're correct in that the mystery that is Bennett will be eventually revealed - he has a larger role to play in this story that just the occasional appearance in Pansy's life.

Draco's role in this story is slowly coming to an end. Pansy will meet with him once more in the future before she finally gets over him once and for all. I can't say for sure about the romance... Well, at least that it won't be the typical sort of romance. It couldn't be, not with Pansy's goals regarding her family.

The next chapter should be up within the week!

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