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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
This was such a great story!!

I feel like more often than not one shot's provide a fleeting glance at a moment or a collage of moments intertwined by some common theme, but this, this was a STORY. I could see the whole encounter play out film-style in front of my eyes as I read. You really did an excellent job creating something unique and wonderful from a list of prompts that you wove into this story very subtley. I was surprised how many of them you listed at the end since I barely noticed them as reading this!!! My only one qualm with this is Salazar's characterization as a proponent of DADA, and staunch critic of the dark arts and of dragon letting -- not that it wasn't a lovely characterization -- but I do wonder how he ended up the muggle hating, advocate of the dark arts later in life.

Great story! I'm sure Slytherin house is very proud.

Author's Response: WitnesstoitAll,

Oh, thank you so much for all of your wonderful comments! I had so much fun trying to get all of those prompts in there. LOL!

As far as Salazar's character... I have to say that this challenge is WAY different that what I write or normally like. I have never read a Founders story. So, honestly, I have no idea what Salazar would be like. I questioned in my mind why Salazar would want to start a school with 3 others that were so different from him and what their common reason would be to come together... and DADA seemed to be a good answer. LOL! And well, I needed him to be good to his dragon in this story. In my mind he is still Muggle-hating and for the dark arts, just not fighting until death. It's that Slytherin self-preservation thing. :)

Thank you so very much for this review. I appreciate every word!

Dark Whisper
P.S. Go Slytherin! :P

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