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I was reading, and I was like "I should do my review as I go along, because then I have more in-depth thoughts, or perhaps more flaily thoughts as I am SHOCKED by the things that happen", but then DADDY ISSUES and oh GOD did I just not NOTICE that Harry and Ginny weren't together? Oh this explains so much. AND YET NOT ENOUGH. Though considering the rather... cold? Impression I've got of Railsverse Harry, my first thought (after going "ZOMG") was "Good for Ginny", because she's still a firecracker of a woman and of a mother.

Ahem. Like the Carla/James time. The wards, the difficulty of breaking them, how frustrating that must be - and yet trying to make it Not an Issue. That she's actually helping and listening with him and his family woes. Though neither of them seem to have consciously, or at least vocally, acknowledged that they have fallen into being WAY more than a semi-regular fling. I look forward to that bit being addressed!

I realised I've missed Della. I didn't know I was quite so fond of her. But I am! And the Quidditch shenanigans, they're always fun. It's like drama and politics ROLLED INTO ONE. Oh, poor Ryan. Then again, he's not NECESSARILY foolish. Workplace romances are common, yes, but then they can also be AWKWARD and DISASTROUS. Still, you have to weigh up the pros and cons!

Ooh, a chapter AND I learn something about etymology! Always a plus! PURPLE! Oh, that's just adorable.

Author's Response: Sometimes I think you read into things too much! Haha. Harry and Ginny are definitely together, I love them too much to have them split! It's just, Harry features less because James and him have Issues. He's not generally a cold person, it's just that this is coming from James' point of view, and James sees him as such because of Said Issues. He'll feature more as the fic goes on, so it'll all become clearer. :)

James and Carlotta are indeed more deeply involved than they realise, but at the moment they're both content with it so it's not a problem. Obviously at the moment it's fairly well disguised by Carlotta's curiosity about magic!

I actually LOVE Della. So I'm glad you do. Obviously there's lots more of her to come, because there's lots of Quidditch time to come. Ryan is indeed in a pickle! Bless him. James is VERY colourblind. Or just a MAN, I've met few males who can actually tell some blues and purples apart. Tsk tsk. Thanks for reviewing!


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